This is amazing writing So deep I dive in.

WONDERFUL! Beautifully realistic exploration of emotions and experiences for both April and especially Raphael! You have done, what all the impatient fangirls/fanboys would fail to do here, bravo!

Gaww...it was so damn seat gripping that. Way to go in cutting short. Bloody hell, the intimidation of wanting to know if he'd do it or not was intense! But just like how the guys react when watching their buddies in a situation like that only to hear they've chicken out. But I ain't a guy, so it is sweet he said that. And been truthful as well. Wouldn't be right if he took the plunge as that is every virgin boys dream as most just go for it. In rapes case it is obvious he truly treasures her and cherishes all she is. We need more like him lol.

Beautiful work, studying sweet and so damn hot!

Not let down at all! Damn you laid it down so right thank you!

I'm actually glad you didn't make then have sex rushedly. I loved their confrontation and there was plenty of sexy moments. It's good Raph said he is not ready because despite of his size and personality the fact that he just finished being a teenager and is inexperienced remains visible. The anticipation of his confidence build up makes it more delectable when it finally happens. A cute, shy virgin big Raph is very hot! I can see why April will wait for him. Great shot, I love your story of multiple one shots about Raph and April 2K14!

Oh, not at all! I actually think this is more realistic for him, since he's always had that gruff exterior, but a softer and more vulnerable side, too. He's the big Teddy bear of the group, so of course he's going to have a soft, mushy inside that he tries to hide, and that includes insecurity and confusion and everything that goes with it. Beautifully done!

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"Do you need me to go kick his ass?" he asked her seriously. "I mean, realistically, he'll kick mine but for you, I'm prepared to take that risk."

This is why Mikey is so wonderful.
Love this series of stories.

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I don't feel let down by this, I think it turned out perfectly, it makes the wait all the sweeter as well. Although I do think it's a shame that I didn't read these shorts in order, maybe you could number them in your summaries? So we all know which order to read them in? Cause they are too awesome not to!

Wow...just wow, the Raphril is so heavy, yet so hot. I love it. Please continue writing these

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That's all I've got. I'm desperately in need of an ice cold shower. Holy shit that was hot. Pretty sure my response to him not being ready would have been, "shut up, yes you are."
This was just...delicious! Loved it all and I was really hesitant to read it but omg am I glad I did! Sorry, no offense to your writing. I just tend to be a jealous, overprotective fangirl. ;)

No let down here. Each one of us, as a writer, has to determine the pace of our stories. And no one wants to see it rushed - slowing the pace, giving supporting reasons, makes it all the better.

I love this! and I love your pacing of this, cant wait for more

Just awesome. Please take your time. I'm enjoying this. Good writing.