| Reviews for Invisible |
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   Honestly.extinct chapter 4 . 4/3/2018 Updaaaaaaatttteeeeee |
| Honestly.extinct chapter 4 . 4/3/2018 More pls |
| dogsrcool5 chapter 4 . 1/1/2018 Please write more |
| Arriana chapter 4 . 11/25/2017 NO WTF! YOU CAN’T JUST STOP HERE, I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER AND I NEED IT NOW! |
| Aliana chapter 2 . 11/25/2017 I LOVE THIS. I CAN’T EVEN. JUST — THIS IS AWESOME. |
| diana chapter 4 . 7/26/2017 please update quickly i can't wait pleaseeee |
| Kiya319 chapter 4 . 6/2/2017 Omg this is so good. Can't wait to see how things turn out. Especially with the way the Lord is giving Lucy so much attention. |
| razxrx chapter 4 . 12/30/2016 Nice story |
| sassykitten1701 chapter 4 . 12/16/2016 ack! where's the next chapter? it's been months! |
| totalqt91 chapter 4 . 9/2/2016 Beautiful story so far. Very interesting, I would love to read more. |
| KEKEKAMOMO chapter 3 . 8/8/2016 This is good but plese continue soon after the 4th chapter i want to know what laxus is gonna do |
| kurahieiritr JIO chapter 4 . 5/13/2016 I must say that I am unfamiliar with the song selection, but I think that the performances are rather nice to add in this case. I suppose that when the woman you marry doesn't really need to be known as a fellow human being, it would be quite normal to pick the most pleasing of the bunch to saddle yourself with long term. |
| kurahieiritr JIO chapter 3 . 5/13/2016 I do believe that Laxus is going to be proven right because said Lord is going to recall who Lucy Heartfilia is and that she is a member of the ton who defected. Things will indeed be a bit dicey once the young Lord unmasks Lucy and causes her a lot of grief in public. Still, I can see Lucy insuring she wiggles out of it since she also knows all the loop holes the Ton use to their advantage every moment that they can. I think the maids and all the other servants being so afraid of Laxus and Gajeel is quite hilarious. The Lord Vince character seems to be a rather pompous brat if you ask me. |
| kurahieiritr JIO chapter 2 . 5/13/2016 I think it is a nice touch that you have decided to add to this story line. Will be interesting to see how Levy and Lucy squirm about in an attempt to get a bit of girl talk time in with the boys in tow. I have a feeling that Lucy is wanting to discuss things to do with the invisibility tonic and the fact that Laxus was the only one to initially recall that she was hurting since even Natsu forgot about her in your version of that episode. The fact Pantherlily now has blackmail fodder to use against the two Slayers and Levy plus Lucy is quite entertaining I think. Smooth move on the cat's part, and I find it very smirk worthy because of all the wicked things Pantherlily can now do with impunity more or less. LOL. |
| bebelynn chapter 4 . 4/26/2016 So epic! Can't wait to read more! Great story :) Thank you for writing! |
