I like never read fics but this was amazing and emotional. I loved the way you described everyone's emotions and it really made me feel like I was part of the story. Amazing 10/10

very good. poor Winry. that's very traumatic.

This was great. Very descriptive. (That sounds super creepy when I say it like that _ What I mean is that you conveyed emotion clearly 'n stuff. If that makes sense at all)

You are a very good writer. I look forward to the next chapter!

Good job vividly illustrating that night. The traumatic aspects were great.

That was...very well written, and very sad. Thank you.