The graytsu was the best part of this fanfic

I like the story, but why are they always yelling?

I love this fucking story. Especially what you do at the end. “With Keys, Trough Flames! Aye!” Lucy, Natsu and Happy, right? If one of my shitty friends (assuming I still have one due to my uncontrollable cursing) asked me to tell them who my favorite author is, I would bless this honour upon you. Makes no sence, just like me does this review do. Right?

OMG I simply love this amazing story

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I'm confused. I'm going to drop all sarcasm and talk to you normally now.
I feel this should have a humor tag on it as well as the romance and friendship ones. But I'm wondering if you aren't being serious. In which case my last comment will definitely upset you. So I apologize for being sarcastic in it if you are indeed being serious.
Is this comedy?
A guy who bosses everyone around, allowing someone he just met to force marriage on him. Why isn't he just refusing? It's not like this jerk he is acting like would care if his father wanted it.
"Do girls play Pokemon?" What kind of question is that. Are you trying to portray Natsu as stupid? If so than the wasteful spending of someone supposedly so rich makes sense. I'm lost as to your intentions. If that is what you were doing it is actually well thought out.
I checked out your profile and it turns out I have read a few of your stories. I have sat down and read them from start to finish type of reading. It's good to see you are still writing by the way. But yes, you have stories that are no where near some of the stuff you have in here (those 'ridiculous' things) so I can say you definitely can write. I'm just confused about what to make of this story.
Well, you have provided an interesting fact. I will be checking out that bit about phones in Japan. And as I said, you can definitely write.
Hope to see more updates from you, but I think I will bow out of this particular story for now unfortunately.
All the best.

In a big mansion with thousands upon thousands of rooms. First off, a dwelling with that many rooms, surely a castle is a more appropriate term by that point over mansion. But seriously, what is this mansion, the size of Luxembourg or something? Just a bit of an exaggeration there me thinks.
Enough cars to fill a village. Well, maybe he is a collector, I can let that one slide. More clothes than he could ever wear. Really? Really? Even if he changed every hour. Really? So 24 hours in a day, or are we not counting sleep, let's skip out on sleep, that's still around 14-16 hours in a day so that many outfits a day, 7 days a week. So between 100 to 112 outfits a week. 52 weeks a year. So up to 5824 outfits a year. Now, how long is he living for? Let's just do the math for 25 years. That's over 145600 outfits. Really? What if he lives for another 50 years, or another 80 years? You want me to believe he owns that many clothes? I'm a girl with expensive taste and I think that's just a bit ridiculous that any one, no matter how rich, could have that many clothes...on top of everything else. And how about that closet, eh, eh.
Not to mention rich people are usually smarter with their money than this.

So basically go into this fic with your sense of humor fully in tact. Got it. Let's go.

Gets to end of first chapter. Yep, definitely need a sense of humor if I have to believe it would play out that way. "Oh, my son just proposed without saying anything to a girl he hasn't said a word to since he met her...a couple hours ago. That isn't suspicious in the least. I'm so happy for him that I will now ignore him when he tells me he didn't propose."

(Sorry if you are offended by me finding humor in all this but it should kind of be expected. You can't think I would take that seriously.) The story has some potential though so I will continue on to the next chapter.

My fourth time reading this. I really love it!

I really enjoyed reading this :D Thanks for this story!

If I was Lucy, I would have done punched Lisanna in the face.

Good story! ;)

aww I Rlly liked that story

I liked last chapter the Best ;)

*drives around in a mini car screaming* SHIP CANON SHIP CANON SHIP CANON SHIIIIIIP CANOOOOON *crashes and falls out of the car amd whispers* nalu...will...be...canon!...

THIS WAS AMAZING! ( All I have to say)

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