Reviews for Night Prowler
Lara1221 chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Haha, that was awesome! I was smiling through the whole conversation, because it was so wonderfully young and innocent and funny. The prompt used to inspire it is great, turning it into a tale of cats and mischief and such. I don't read much of these guys, but I might start. nice!
DobbyRocksSocks chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
This really made me laugh :) I almost missed reviewing it altogether, my bad. I think you pulled off a conversation set in the middle of the night really well, the randomness of ideas that come then are often great.
I can't help but wonder if it worked... :)
FandaticForeverAndAlways chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Yep, I liked it! I love exploring minor characters and you this brilliantly. It was funny, and very realistic. I could actually imagine this scene happening. This was a nice light-hearted story. It was fun to read about the Ravenclaws in their dorm, and I enjoyed reading it. Good job! :)
Paradox.bookjunkie chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
ha ha. Like that'll do much. LOL.
This was well written, and I loved the humour. Good job.
NeonDomino chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
This was funny. Their solution to their cat problem is another cat? Chances are that second cat will just do the same thing as the first and terrorise them all!
There is no way Michael would give up the second cat if it didn't work out, considering how attached he is to the first cat.
Very well written :)
jennybenny2845 chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
As a proud cat owner, I really enjoyed this story. Even the title had me smiling! Oh, cats! Unfortunately, night is when they perk up doing who knows what. I once forgot to give my cat dry food at night with her dinner. She had no qualms about asking for it at 2:30 in the morning. Needless to say, I never forgot her dry food ever again.

I loved the dialogue between all the boys, and it was very easy to read. Oftentimes, I have a hard time with dialogue driven stories, but this really worked. I could sense the annoyance in each both with Vera. The poor girl just wants some warmth and love! Oh, and she probably could sense that those boys don't like cats and so she gravitated toward them.

As for their brilliant idea - perhaps it'll backfire on them! Sometimes, two cats isn't right solution. Maybe Vera can meet Crookshanks instead? Oooh... you should totally write a Vera/Crookshanks piece. ;-)

Again, nice job on this funny, cat-centric fic!
pygmypuff8 chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Haha, I was constantly laughing while reading this fic. I loved that you made the story about a cat, as I love cats. I really like the dialogue between the boys, very funny. I felt very sorry for poor Michael when the boys teased him about his beauty sleep, poor thing. All in all, a very funny and satisfying fic.
deletes chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
I did like it! There aren't many writers that I actually enjoy reading friendship fics from, but you are certainly one of them :) I laughed a lot, especially initially at the idea of Stephen waking up with a cat on his face XD And the beauty sleep comment was very funny too. It a had a lovely, light-hearted tone that cheered me up :D
alyssialui chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Haha, so the solution to one annoying cat is to get another cat... And then have two annoying cats? This was a nice, light fic good for a few chuckles. And it was nice to see a scene with students other than the famed ones. Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Very enjoyable story. You don't see many realistic stories about the other houses, namely Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. Thank you for giving them normal personalities instead of making them really weird or obnoxious.