The author: Oh, you want to know what's going on?
to bad, heres a scene with a guy getting tortured by alliance marines and David Anderson.

This is not a prologue. This is a fuck you to me, because I don't want to know where the story is going. It is better as a surprise.

But... But... But... Why is there no sequel? This story is fantastic, so good in fact, that it demands a sequel!
Several chapters had me in tears, Tyler and "Vanessa" 's love story was amazing, and you did a great job keeping the emotion of Mass Effect 2 in this story, it flowed perfectly!
Also, Vanessa is a great name for Shepard!
For real though, you have written a fanfic that is so good, it Must have a sequel! If you are having trouble with finding inspiration, I recommend playing Mass Effect 3 again, get those creative juices flowing. This story actually made me reinstall ME2, so I'll be playing it for the umpteenth time.

Seriously, again, you have written an amazing story, I truly hope you can find the inspiration to continue soon!

You have spent 4 chapters wasting my time not getting to the damn point. Jesus you suck

Most of this chapter was stupid.

I got to chapter 1, read the description of this character and had to stop reading this because it’s so stupid

This was an amazing story! My life has gotten busy in the past few months but I've always made time for your story. I look forward to the continued story of this one. You re without a doubt the best author on this site

Sorry, but I can't follow this - your storyline is just not flowing... AT ALL. First he's being tortured by anderson, then he's on a cerberus ship where they are redoing shepard, then he's on the citadel and being chased - I don't see any flow for this, no *why* or understanding of the reasons why things are happening, and why in this order.

Also note- you don't want to have people ever skip portions of your story, if you want them to read it, don't put it in.

I'm also not feeling any tie in between the summary and these first chapters.

Nice story

AWESOME! AWESOME! Need next part!

Awesome emotional read!

Greatly wrote chapter! Nothing serious or dramatic happened, just Shepard with her thoughts as she watched everyone, makes for good insightful reading that I like seeing in stories.

Nice chapter

Nice chapter

Most awesomest read!