Good chapter, but when ever someone talkes, there alway seems to be a space after the first set of quotation marks. So, I would go back through and remove the space. And also, since you have all the other factions captolized you should go ahead and capitolize Abnegation.

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Divergents* in the third paragraph.

I love this story so much! Please update! :)

isn't divergent supposed to belong in every faction or something? Since she didn't get Candor since she lied

I don't know if you care or not but your got the button colors mixed up at the very end of this chapter. I read a head in the other chapter just to make sure it wasn't on purpose, and it's not like it's a huge mistake, but it does mess with the reading flow of the story which is already pretty choppy.

I love your work. Please finish the story!

I still have hope you will finish this story...

love it. update soon

Great story so far.

Wonderful
Update immediately, please!

Tbh i'm getting quite annoyed with Rianna. I understand that she's scared for her life but the way things are looking up, she's using Eric... It's a good story but they're too mistrustful with each other, always jumping to conclusions. With the way the story is going, i'd be surprise if they got in to a relationship with each other. And Four, i kinda hope Rianna did more with the situation with Four. Because of him, Rianna almost died and basically he's the one who started the mess with Eric and Rianna. I'd also be surprised if Rianna forgived Four so easily. Four also didn't apologized for letting Rianna be in danger.

I really hope you won't abandon this fic! I can't wait to see what will next

Damn, son. Shit's 'bout to get real.

You have to update! I'm waiting for it :)

I love this story. This is my go to Divergent story when I wanna read something. Please continue this story. It is amazing.