So mystic and cool. Ive said this a trillion times i think but i love your writing so much.

At first it was awkward for me to read... because Fai and Kuro are two horny dogs and Shaoran get in the middle of their thoughts, so it was awkward.. for poor Shaoran xD.. but it was very entertaining and interesting!

Here are my two favorite parts:
"I can hear his thoughts now. It's bad enough just having to be in a room with an adjacent wall. I'm going to hear way way too much about their sex life before this trip is over..." - and ofcourse fai's, uh... thoughts perior to this shaoran's reaction xD... about the draging to bed..

"Syaoran found out to his relief that walls did seem to be enough to block the constant stream-of-consciousness coming from the undervoice, but unfortunately did very little for more traditional headboard-banging sounds." lOl xDDD

This was very interesting!

I love how you deviated from the norm when it comes to Kurogane and his parents. I'm pretty sure this is the only story I've read so far revolving around our beloved Kuro-parents that shows them in a practical light; that they're still humans who have flaws but still love their child and each other despite these imperfections.

I like the concept you used for this story too. Not only were you able to pave a way for some wonderful KuroFai moments, but you managed to sneak in some humor in there as well. Kudos for making the story a brilliant one!

Ahhhhhh this one was really intriguing. The whole concept of the undervoice was really interesting and played well into the characters and the plot and how much they were able to communicate and hide from each other. I think the line where Kurogane just froze and they couldn't hear anything from him at all was the most powerful. I just. Have been thinking about that image all day long, aha.