This is honestly very beautiful. I remember passing by your stories but, I didn't think I would enjoy it. Now that I've read it, I'm happy I did. I love how you made her girly but, you've still got her Annabeth spark in there. Writing this story in second-person was a very creative idea! This is amazing. I love your writing style.

-Betteroffgone

I THINK I'M HYPERVENTILATING FROM THE PERCABETH FEELS! LOVED IT!

It is creative and so well-written. Beautiful. :)

This is so great! I love it even though by definition I should hate it. Somehow you made a girly, abandoning, divorced Annabeth, and you made me love her. And that's tough because I'm touchy about my girl. I could picture every moment and the way you wrote was so poetic yet storytelling. Now, if this was a multichap where it's just telling this story as some cliche ex-best friends, Anna turned girly, Percy dating Rachel story I probably wouldn't have read it (I'm picky that way) but you told it just right, so well that even though I should hate it, I love it. I love how you wrote it in second person (so creative btw), I love the list, I love the end I love it all.
Love,
Lili

Now I hate people named jake*squels* JUST KIDDING,

WHY ISN'T THIS PLASTERED ON BILLBOARDS EVERYWHERE?! ITS SO AMAZING!

Hmm, thought it would be better. Maybe if it had a sad ending it would have. But I liked it.

ALLAH (S.W.T) is the best

WOW! WOW... WOW...

I don't even know how to properly write a review for this? It's not like anything I've ever read and I really enjoyed it! It was very well done. I really liked the style of it.

That's all I can articulate at the moment, but thank you for writing this, man. It's super cool.

Okay, I was confused in the first part, doubting whether they would get together and I completely loved it. Il liked how you put she was lying in brackets.

This was great. The twists and turns were thrilling. Good job.