Interesting story, just not sure where you were headed with it. Nice dialogue and characterization, but plot lacked a bit. The alternate world had some interesting twists.

This Harry needs a kick in the ass. Not sure what sort of character you are aiming for, but this one leaves much to be desired. If it’s PTSD, then James should recognize it and get him help. Otherwise, Harry just comes across as a big baby (he called himself out in this chapter!).

And how about a wand? He is a wizard, yes?

So no one talks about Lily? Did I miss that part?

Owww I love your story, it well written and have wonderful plot , I read it one moment, thank you! I wish to find update someday

nice

interesting

Thanks so much for writing! Very very awesome story. Please finish it; I can't wait to see how it ends!

Oh. The story ended. And that was three years ago when I'm writing this.
Thank you for your story. I'd love to see the counterparts of this world.
But good job. I can ask nothing more.

Thoroughly impressed! I just found your story and while it looks like it won’t be finished and I’m not sure you’ll get this I wanted to let you know what a totally great story you have. Thank you for hours of pleasurable reading while my dog sleeps next to me recovering.

Its great would be better if Harry was more strong willed so he new what's what and stood up and more confident in himself and he should have brought everything with him in a trunk and headed around his neck or something or his whole Fortune everything from because the break-in in Gringotts but that's just my opinion you've got a great writing style and I love your your writing in your stories but there should be just a little bit more hairy in my view thank you I loved the story!

I remember reading this years ago and I am so glad I finally managed to find it again! It's definitely a story that has stayed with me even after switching various fandoms. Thank you for sharing this story with us!

Jesus, this is good. Really represents the best of what fan fiction can be. Have to admit I wanted to see Harry defeat Tom in this world as well, this time on Harry’s own terms (at least once he dealt with his issues).

Best of luck in the future.

Is he ever gonna tell anyone about the horcruxes? You know the thing making V-dog virtually indestructible?

This is brilliant! I wish for a miracle that you update! I really want to see what happens next. But thanks for what’s there.

PLEASE UPDATE! YOUR STORY IS AMZING!️️️️️️️