Nice TFS reference

'What. The. Fu-This is nice, roll with it.'
Perseus, the Inner Demon.

Ooh, let me add one more thing, it’s cool to have an inner demon in Percy, just it might be better if he was actively trying to fight it, it would make the reader respect him.

Constructive Criticism time! Great story, the only thing bad is the main character, you’ve made yourself an unreliable main character, by making him a jerk, I, as a reader, can no longer feel sympathy for him. You need the reader to be able to stand by the main character, and you can’t do that when he’s crazy with a voice in his head and just killed someone. Still it is well written.

Personal issue . . . If this is another story where Percy will stand up to literally anyone and everyone EXCEPT Arty and her pathetic hunters and let them beat on him and injure him without retaliating . . . Then that alone ruins this story for me.

this deserves more chapters, and this is my 5th time rereading

Look man, what the actual FUCK! This is AMAZING, STUPID, AND FUCKING GENIUS!

OMG it's Deans car. He is going to be mad.

nice choice of a car, 1967 chevy impala's are awesome

I like Perseus reaction to Artemis kissing percy. Thats comical

This was a fantastic read well done

Okay so I've had my reservations about this story so far. I've liked it and it's been super interesting. But once ya brought in Supernatural it was just great. And the "kinda looked like a moose" line was perfect.

you suck

Yo bro, when you going to start on the sequel! It's been forever

Nope, just Cause Percy's heartbroken, not because hes Olympus' hero, that's why Artemis asks them to ignore Percy.