At a certain point, this story is just too hard to read. You really should have edited it, or had someone proofread your work. The dialog is very awkward, there are commas where there shouldn't be, and places that desperately need commas. The idea for the story is great, but the execution leaves much to be desired.

It was rushed! When did Klaus came around? How did they get married? It was like reading a train wreck! Could have been better!

Nice ending!

I loved this story.

How are they already showing at like a month

Do a bloody once over once you 've written a chapter... every chapter is filled with grammar and vocabulary errors and whilst i try to overlook them it's getting marginally harder.

aw the ending was just perfect would of love to have a few chapters of caroline and klaus falling in love and marry but still so cute a fluffy

That's a sweet ending :)

AWESOME STORY I LOVED IT!

Loved the story! Just read it in a row because I recently turned back into a Klaroline shipper again, although I never really continued watching TVD after season two. But these two? I love them :3

Did you think of writing the part where Klaus and Caroline finally got together? I mean, it was obvious that Klaus was totally in love with her but when did that all happen?

Love x3

Sequel?

Love the pun to Carolines personality and it being a blood type for her store name

NOOOOO IT'S OVER!

Elena and davina

It was great