I love it!

I really liked this story. And i liked your explanation of elsa's curse. It made sense. However i wish you did one thing. Separate the story into chapters, fanfiction lets you add chapters to a story but keeps it within the story. That way its not disjointed

I love this idea!

Really well written story :)

I love Idunn and Agdar's story so this fanfic of course was a touching read:) And you really wrote it well, their story is so sweet. I feel soo sad for all of Elsa's ancestors now, and it's actually a pretty cool backstory. But this makes Frozen so much more awesome cause 1. Agdar and Idunn got engaged on a boat and sadly died on one too, but at least they were happy! 2. Elsa is a complete BA for surviving and conquering her magic!

The history of Idunn's family is very detailed. Idunn's reaction to Elsa showing magic is perfect.