one more chapter of this would be nice

Nice! While I wanted more but could see why this ended here :)

Real nice

I really hope you will write sequel of this oneshot.

LOVE it!

This was really cute and very much in character. I think you captured both Ren and Kyoko very well. Thank you for sharing :)

Oh yeah! I remember reading this one on the roadtrip. I liked this one as well. It just refused to let me login on my phone to do things as myself. The only thing I could do was review while typing in my name every time.
Your 'thinker' did come clear across it, so don't worry.

Your reader,
I.G.

Nice work!
This could really use another chapter. A short one, mind you, the ending feels too unexpected.
Apart from that, what you have here is honestly quite good. I like the way Ren just naturally progresses into a first name basis. And despite them acting in way we haven't seen before it doesn't seem out of character really. The beginning could use a bit more of an introduction (mainly to set the mood for both Kyoko's fear) but it's okay as is anyway.
Again, nicely done!

Ren and his... persuasive... skill is scary. If he were a detective, he'd scared sh*t every prep out that has been graced by his .. presence in the interrogation room Lol.

I like this, please continue this fiction.

That was wonderfully amusing!

That was very admirable! And entertaining. Nice work! Thank you for sharing- the manipulation by Ren to make Kyoko frantic was so very funny!

nice! :D funny, laughing so hard. tsuruga-san sure is something

haha! That was pretty good! I didn't think it was too OOC! In fact Kyoko's reponses about evil spirits were just too cute! I really want to pinch her cheeks now! :P Thnx for sharing this!
-Daredevil Fangirl( Can't login now! or I would have faved this! )

I really enjoyed reading this! It actually made me laugh! I like how Ren is willing to take it to the extremes lol! Can't wait for more, gambatte!