Oh, that's lovely! What a powerful image! Thanks!

Woah. Nice chapter! Is this just a one-shot?

Waaaaaahhhhh! So sad!

"After midnight, everyone's masks came off and showed who they really were." That, my friend, was a beautiful line. Very poetic, which I always adore.

The rest of the story was simply amazing and touching - you portrayed Obi-Wan and Anakin's friendship beautifully and even put in a few bits about the dread that readers felt over what was to come for these two.

"You turned. And you destroyed everything."

"Anakin had dreams...where Obi-Wan killed him, after that."

In conclusion, this was an awesome piece of writing and I look forward to what other future stories you plan on posting.

Too much use of his name. We all know what it is, use a pronoun or stand-in from time to time.
On the whole, though, I really like this. You do very good dreams.

Excellent introspection by Anakin. Obi-Wan was portrayed well, too. I get echoes of, "You *will* be a Jedi. I promise." It's that same steely will. Good characterization all around.