Reviews for All Things Fanciful and Free |
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Hyoxjnn chapter 1 . 8/23/2014 Waiiit, did you just- 'fourth wall gpt shut down'- you can't just do that! XD Well, that was... Not what I was expecting, but it was very craxy, and very fun to read X3 Good times, all 'round. Good luck with your final Prompt :D |
Chronic Guardian chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 Oh... my head. As a tribute to Anything That's Ordinary, this DEFINITELY hits it's mark. Awkwardness like Hao being the... "princess" and then it turning out to be Manta's fault somehow. Despite a horrendously large cast being involved, you do a decent job of slightly distinguishing most of them from each other and creating an enjoyably wacky/mishmashed fourth wall breaker that doesn't read like unseasoned oatmeal. Anyway, because you set it up to not be taken seriously, you get away with a LOT, and I respect that you managed to do so. It's hard to set the right mood for a story so the reader knows what to expect, but you did well. Good luck with the last two weeks! Regards, -CG |