Reviews for Better Left Unsaid |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Finally a chapter at last. I was close to forget this story but thankfully didn't once I got remembered of Deathstrike. Damn, lots of intensive tension like always. I hope the kids will be saved in right time, and damn Deathstrike in his vampire style; feral, lethal and merciless like always. So you're planning for a romance story? Well, I'm not a master of love directly, but I'd be glad to help ya with ideas. I wonder how Deathstrike would react if he get to experience love for first time, and I don't mind if you choose either a Decepticon or an Autobot to him and make a pairing, however I do suggest you'll need all the ideas to make the pairing perfectly sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good, interesting too |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! What a good chapter! So Deathstrike is some kind of vampire? Well, I may not be directly a vampire fan but I don't care for Deathstrike is really cool one. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best fics out there! Can't wait for more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH. MY. GOD! Now that was very great thrilling reading there and goddamn cliffhanger at the end! Why must you always put me on the edge of the seat all the time while reading through this. Now I'm gettting really scared now. Will the humans live? No, I really need to read the next one SOON! Update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for a late reply but it's better than never? Nah, the good thing is that this chapter is very good one! Intensive as well. Hehe, you're very welcome, my friend. I hope that Deathstrike will unleash hell soon... Oh, I can feel it already. I cannot wait to read more! Update soon when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good cliffhanger, greatly anticipating more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear! Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! Now things are getting a lot tensed now... I fear the Autobots will face the worst challenge yet. So far, no mistakes at all. |
![]() ![]() Did like! |
![]() ![]() No good ideas for this sorry, but maybe you could include the battle where deathstrike is caught by the bots so that it ties in with captured |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear... I'm getting a very bad feeling that Deathstrike will outburst in rage soon. I hope he's not gonna unleash the hell upon the 'Cons yet, although... I'd like to see Deathstrike unleashing the hell! MWHAHAHAHAHAH! Hmm, ideas you need you say? Think if Deathstrike might hear an inner voice inside his head, the voice coming from the inner rage he's struggling to control over. Think if he's struggling himself to keep his control in check but soon fall victim for the rage? Yes... every Decepticon wouldn't be safe! Hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oj, oj, oj, oj! So dark, intensive and tensed! Deathstrike is someone you really must stay away from or else you risk to be killed on the first place. I won't be standing on his way if I were smart enough. Great reading! I enjoyed reading this one! I like that Breakdown is Deathstrike's partner, and to be honest they fit much together. Much better than Breakdown does with Knock Out. XD |
![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() No, I think it makes him seem more dangerous actually. And yeah, clear there wasn't any KO, but I jusr type my mind. :-) |