Awwww! Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Your style is also wonderful. You keep a steady rhythm of short sentence/long sentence/ short again that draws the reader in. Clearly, you are a writer. I wish there were more Bellarke stories like this one out there. :)

Well that was deeply depressing. Note, I'm not saying it was bad. Well written, well thought out, well organized. But with a sad undertone running all the way through it.

so sad! ;( but amazing at the same time. Congratulations! ;)

That's just so, I don't even know. Heartbreaking? Beautiful? I feel like I just lost someone I loved. That's how well you wrote this.

Shit, this hurt. You are way too good with all the characterising and patching together of the memories and all the character development and effects of time and generally making me feel like broken-but-still-going Bellamy... aargh amazing job /3

This was... fucking beautiful, and sad, and just ugh. So well done, I can't even say! Thank you for killing me over here. Totally worth it.

Aawww I'm heartbroken. That's was just amazingly beautiful! I loved everything about it even the fact he lost her because life isn't fair and that's how it works. I love this as a stand alone I do but I wouldn't say no to a sequel lol
Awesome job!

I was laughing and thinking how much I liked this story, but now I am in tears and the writing is still wonderful to not like it. /3

Well friiiick. I was not expecting that. And now I'm sobbing. This was beautiful and so heartbreaking and I don't know what to do with myself now.

I loved this story - am so sad Clarke died but it made the story MORE, if you know what I mean. You wrote the interactions between all the characters really well, explored their relationships perfectly. Bellamy and Clarke's relationship really is something different - I hope in the show they become a couple, though I can't see it happening in the near future.

My god that was sad. No more like that please. Very good writing though. You could have excluded Raven.

He lost her :( great story!

Awwww how sad :( great job though :)