Take one already, don't just talk about

ok I can honestly say I didn't see that coming XD

that is one seriously masochistic little elf

Lucius is gunna be so pissed when he figures out he just got played XD

Thank you for posting this work; It has amused me twice.

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I can just picture the two cellists as the two kids doing this this is awesome

Course hes not going to survive. He was eaten by a humongous, extremely venomous snake, and is not able to do Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (see Naruto vs Orochimarus snake in the chuunin exams). Though he can copy himself, so maybe hell make hundreds of copies of himself to explode the snake?

Havent read the whole chapter, I scrolled down from the middle. Why? Because after Miss Greengrass refused to call Harry «Black Potter», and just called him Potter to wind him up, the Harry portrayed in this rather fun story, would not have used her whole name; he would wind her up back by calling her «Miss Grass» og «Miss Green». It would have been the perfect comeback, just up his alley!

Slash would be OK, except for Malfoy, Snape or Tom Riddle - 90 % or more of the slash stories are with them - I really dont understand it! Dean would be nice, or Neville, or just make an OC.

Also, Hermione, Susan Bones, Daphne Greengrass are OK. Or an OC.

Awesome first word :)

Why the hell would you kill her? That was a stupidly intricate plan just to kill her. While I admit to having a soft spot for couples and children, this still seems senseless. You already killed her whole family, why did she have to die as well?

I can’t imagine Harry just letting Victoria go like that. He’s always been very caring and just telling her a lie and then leaving her, especially with that amulet seems really off for him.

this is very good

sad yes but a muggle gf didn't belong in his future. I figured you would get rid of her somehow. thought Snape would obliviate her to forget Harry

Fantastic story. I’m really going to miss Arcturus. He seemed to be the glue holding things together. Can’t wait to see where this goes next! Excellent writing!