This is very intriguing story so far. It has my heart breaking for both of them.

This has a feeling of the movie she’s all that but instead of it being the girl it’s the guy. So far I’m loving this. I was looking for a high school fanfic of the OUAT group.

Much much better !

Now we are getting somewhere

I am sad ...

Good one

This is a great story, loved it !

Very cute.

Funny chapter. Thank you for the laughs, I definitely laughed out loud ;)
I really liked that she wouldn't stand for letting him put himself down.

First chapter and I am thoroughly intrigued how your going to put your own spin on this. The fact that Killian snubbed her and knew of the bet beforehand was awesome!

I just finished chapter fifteen and I'm going to continue, I just had to stop and say how much I loved this. You're capturing the terrible, wonderful, terrifying, delightful teenage butterflies really well. And their first time sleeping together was just so good to read...too often in fanfiction we just get 'oh it was so so great (even though they have no experience) oh yeah'. Here you acknowledged that they had different experience, acknowledged some of the difficulties of that, and still made it so sweet! :) I'm just grinning like an idiot. Thank you for this :)

Awwww this was so cute! HE PLAYED THE ADELE SONG. I love this fic so much :D

So adorable! Absolutely wonderful story! It was a pleasure to read!

Really interesting start!

I'm loving it so far just really want them to get together