okay, but i wanna see newborn jasper and newborn erica trying to survive the southern vampire wars together... like, would she have any powers? would maria find her useful to keep around? or would she make jasper kill her?

I do hope you actually come back. I really enjoy this story, and I relate to Erica in a way I'm not really used to. Its been around 8 months since added this, and I won't lie, I've kind of loast hope. I hope you find your way back someday.

Waiting here for when you get back xo

Best chapter so far xo

I know you’ve described your characters differently but somehow I just can’t get the two man girls from Booksmart out of my head.

Ah yes Debbie Hicks. She’s a hoot! Most likely a bot xo

I think you meant reincarnation not resurrection xo

Still needs some work and edits xo

Seeing the sign language is good _

In chapter 1 you said she was barely passing history, math was laughable, and she got a solid B in a subject I can’t remember. You contradict that in this chapter saying that Erica was no Cullen but kept good enough grades and that jasper would regret not working with her when she got an A. Even though she’s barely passing history...

I’m really trying not to be mean in my comments, I am enjoying your story so far but you do need some edits here if you ever go back to edit these chapters. Sorry to be nitpicking...

I find it a bit weird that someone who was born mute never learned sign language instead of having to write everything down... I understand school and society wise that communication being majority but within her family you’d think they’d utilize sign.

I'm honestly looking forward to the next chapter

this fic is honestly so amazing, i'm super glad you've decided to continue it!

New reader here! I love it, please come back and write more.

We’ll be waiting for you! This story is really great and not that cheesy as some story does. Even if the focused is not much about Erica and Jasper, I like that you’re fleshing out her relationship with others too. I hope there is more interaction with everyone too because they are just so sweet and yes she has a family with her mother and father but I think the Cullen’s made a much more sense of being her family than her actual one. It’s not to invalidate her own family though but I think that they either blamed themselves a lot or tiptoed around her too much to really establish a firm relationship with her. All in all I’m really curious how her story will turn out and also I think I would like to ship Edward and Amy, not because of “a refreshing Edward/oc” but I think she will be good for him like it might bring out more of “himself” than always brooding.