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Love your story girls also...you gonna continue with this one? Hope so..

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Love this. I'm reading Girls as well! I really like that Beth is a little spitfire in this story. She doesn't hesitate to call Daryl on his crap. I really hope you update on it!

Love this story, has some good dialog between Beth & Daryl... well Beth anyway ;). I'm reading GIRLS (really enjoying that story, by the way) & since I'm caught up I thought check one of your other one... and here I am. Just as that one has real fun interaction between multiple characters, this does as well. The Greene family, Merle, Carol, Rick... & even Jimmy held conversation with the main characters. I particularly liked chapter 3, mostly the car scene. Beth's a little fire plug, isn't she?! I thought it was cool, how she turned it on Daryl, make him feel a bit off, for a change. I also enjoyed this last chapter (6) as well. The first part was funny;the sexy dream, awkwardly being woken from the dream, the scene cracked me up. Then, the whole interaction between Beth & Daryl, was both clumsy & charming, flowing into gentle & loving. Plus, Daryl's reveal (he had a couple, in the story... good job), I thought you did great showing his chivalrus manner... it was very good, excellent job! I could see this as their AU lives, it doesn't seem to be much of a stretch for some of the characters. Really dig the story & looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!

I hope you come back to this sometime! It's good. :D

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I like it! AU Bethyls are my favorite stories! And they are so hard to come by, so I hope you keep updating!

I am inlove with this story! I love Beth and Daryl and I love the creative things you do to make the story feel so real. I can't wait for the next chapter!

So sweet and gentle. Love Daryl. Poor Beth.

Again Merle is an ass. Poor Daryl.

Merely is such a selfish ass!

She was kinda nosy. Lol.

Poor guy needs a hug. I worry about Beth working alone!