Reviews for A Daughter's Difference
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
In Future Trunks' timeline, Gohan and Videl never meet

The Androids then went on to create mayhem on Earth and no one could stop them. Future Gohan can train Trunks to become a strong fighter, talented swordsman, and unleash his Super Saiyan abilities. Unfortunately, in Future Trunks' timeline, Gohan and Videl never meet, as they're both destroyed. Pan was never born, which is why Future Trunks was so surprised to meet her when he went back in time.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4
In Future Trunks' timeline, Gohan and Videl never meet

The Androids then went on to create mayhem on Earth and no one could stop them. Future Gohan can train Trunks to become a strong fighter, talented swordsman, and unleash his Super Saiyan abilities. Unfortunately, in Future Trunks' timeline, Gohan and Videl never meet, as they're both destroyed. Pan was never born, which is why Future Trunks was so surprised to meet her when he went back in time.
J chapter 18 . 6/4
Great chapter, at first i thought it was just the same as it always was, (which is still enjoyable) until i got to gohan's breakdown, that was very well done. A bit of angst but he's still trying to see things clearly, past his recent anger while trying to be fair, and also considerate of trunks. Great scene.

and don't take this the wrong way, but this feels like a chapter that could have come out two years ago.
I mean when stories like this have a long hiatus a lot of times the writing style, word choice etc. are different to where it almost feels like 2 different stories.

I'm saying its improved, but the tone/characterization all still matches so the continuation felt seamless.

Thanks, a lot for continuing with this.
Chaosblaze94 chapter 2 . 6/5
ChiChi is crazier then Sheogorath lord of madness. who has an 11 year old kid learn thermodynamics and calculus this is college level someone call the a therapist because ChiChi is
BraveVesperia chapter 3 . 6/1
Chi-Chi is pretty out of character, yes she is a hard ass but in cannon Gohan never showed any desire to train. I honestly don't think Chi-Chi would be this mindlessly belligerent if Gohan actually expressed a desire to do something.
lil dynamic chapter 18 . 5/21
Your back!
Another nice long chapter, I’m glad you’ve decided to not only update, but confirm that this story isn’t dead yet and there’s still a lot more to continue writing about, since this is still years before the buu saga there’s so many possibilities that this story can go in multiple directions with tons of material to go thru, with Gohan so much mature now and with the responsibility of taking care of pan, the future looks bright.
Thank you for your time and I’m sorry my review isn’t as constructive as the others, I am so glad that I’ve added this story to my alerts and favorites, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Maritza92 chapter 18 . 5/18
please update again I would like to see how things play out from here on out.
NodMPortant chapter 18 . 5/18
It's nice to see another chapter, I think that the ending was fitting. Let's hope that Chi-Chi will come around, keep up the good work.
Iwik chapter 18 . 5/18
I'm not crying, you are..

Chichis response broke my heart. As did Gohan's rant. He has a point, but I'm glad he's keeping the door open. I do hope Chichi will meet him halfway. Parenting isn't as black and white as people make it out to be. You blunder along and hope for the best mostly.

Will there be a time skip soon? And I hope you're not going to send Gohan to High School. Seems silly since he already has a job and doesn't need the topics they discuss there. Might be fun to send Pan to school though..

Thank you for updating! Don't feel bad for having other priorities.
X3runner chapter 18 . 5/17
You could have super trunks be a tangent parallel timeline
Masquer Q chapter 18 . 5/17
It definitely was worth the wait. Though if you told the me of two years ago that the next update was going to be waaaay later, I may have been a bit disappointed. Just a tad.
Anyways, the interactions between the characters, especially Gohan and Mirai, were very alive. As in it wasn't just about progressing plot, upgrading someone's powers, or any of that. It was just two heavily weighed people talking about their pasts. While it seems like Mirai was helping Gohan by letting him unload the issues with his parents, Gohan was in a way helping Mirai as well. Mirai Trunks always felt like a dead weight to his Master until the very end of Mirai Gohan's life. Seeing the troubles that the present Gohan is struggling with and being able to listen and help him talk about it... I think it would have helped resolve Mirai Trunks' pains.
Thank you for including those scenes. More than just clever plot twists or the likes, scenes like these that hit people's hearts and give more depths and insight to characters is what truly pulls people into the story.
Also, I love the shenanigans that the Z-Fighters go through. And making Chiaotzu relevant was awesome. And nice touch on present Bulma's teasing with girls. It's exactly what mothers would say, and it also hints Mai from DBS. 9.5/10, awesome!
777torn777 chapter 18 . 5/17
Rereading was a great trip down memory lane. If you wanted a way to get away from addingthe future timeline back into the story, you could pretty confidently argue that Trunks already having ssj 2 early would give him enough of a head start so his Majin Bu scenario doesn’t end in Shin and by conjunction Berrus dying. Then all Trunks has to do is stall long enough for Shin to warn Whis that multiverse level threat is about. Just food for thought. I can’t wait to see how everyone progresses. The humans can stop focusing on being the strongest and focus on increases technique and skills. Piccolo is kinda in a middle of the road position where I guess he could go either way. Also again welcome back
thewittywhy chapter 18 . 5/17
I read all eighteen chapters, and loved every minute of it. This entire thing is beautiful. Even if I takes time, I am happy for this wonderful story.
Djibrel chapter 18 . 5/17
I am happy this is back
Guest chapter 18 . 5/17
Thanks for updating your story! Good chapter!
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