Reviews for Heartache
BeautifulSamurai chapter 1 . 3/28
This was so so sweet! I love your writing
KillTheBeast chapter 1 . 3/21
It ain't crappy... It lit legit good
0309Soul chapter 1 . 3/18/2019
oh my god, this is the cutest thing I've read in a while! I love it so much!
PrincessIlora chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
I the fluff in this fanfiction. Don't put your work down; be confident! I honestly believe that Natsu would have (if he actually thought his love for Lucy through because contrary to many fellow Fairy Tail fans' beliefs, Natsu has a brain but doesn't like to use it) used the love-letter tactic because he knows Lucy is a romantic and would do most anything for Lucy. Therefore, I believe that this is a great fanfiction and that Natsu is not out of character.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2017
I'm sorry that I didn't read the whole thing but I fan girl scream a lot and loudly after reaching the cute if my parents find me reading romance they're going to tease me and tell me I can't have a boyfriend until I'm ,sorry!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
Natsu isn't OOC at all! Loved the story, disappointed it's just a one-shot tho. Hahaha. Keep up the great work!
FloatieSama chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW! IT"S SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
suavespanol chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
This is cute
LibrAmanda chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
My face when Lucy found out about Natsu dropping the notes: ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

I wanted t want me a relationship dynamic like this why can't I get me something like this ugh.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
KeyMaster25 chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
Omg! Hate-Love relationships are awesome...
...In animes and mangas...
Mystic Mists chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
I loved this story, it was funny asf and wow! LOL
Trintoo chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
I certainly don't think this is a crappy one shot, and I love it!
toomuchfannotenoughgirl chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
Don't worry Hun a bit of ooc is okay in au's where adorable love happens
22catliu chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
I don't like this chapter... I LOVE IT! Go NaLu! _
SherrySienna chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
SO SWEET AW AWAWAWAWAWAWAW! SWEET LIKE ALWAYSSSS! I LOVEEEEEE YOUAHHJJJJJJHJHHHH ! I rather read your fanfic than eat a box of pizza /ot really
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