you said lets give them privacy because you lazy right.

Ah Roblox, I love to play Call of Robloxia 5 it's just so awesome.

The story is really good, thoug I don't like CheliaxRomeo. Hope you update soon :)

There are some typos in the story but overall, this is great! I really hope you update frequently!

I enjoy the plot of your story however it needs to be spaced and flushed out. By making the format just several block paragraphs it takes away the enjoyment because the reader has to struggle to decipher whats dialogue, description, or actual story. Its just something that really bothered me in the beginning but got much better as you went on. Also i recommend flushing out the story, really get into the characters emotions, describe the setting with interesting details, make the images in the readers mind come to life. I really do like the story even though its cliche i still love set ups like this in writing. I greatly hope you make another chapter. Again those were just my opinions otherwise good job. -Batman Out

Please make more