just found your stories. sorry about your accident. Know what you mean about dumb hands hope you are better now...

Great story!

Fun premise. Theres not nearly enough well written Dawn focused stuff out there.

Would love to see this continued.

Quite a nice story.

Wow Angel’s dead...this takes a major divergence...I like it

Okay I am already in love with this

Lol. Love how you ended angel.

I miss your stories man. You ever coming back?

I hope you recover. I hope to read more of this. Thank you.

Thank you for the stay of a really good story, if you continue this I'd love to see where you'll take it, and the end.. What a cliffhanger!
I would love to see how the multi-slayer group would handle some of the major issues of the earlier series too. Az

it's been early 2 years since this updated but I suppose Origins has your focus. If I a to wager a guess I figure you're waiting to finish up Origins then moving back to this.

Ah...it makes sense now. Though of people Dawn wanted to recruit I'm wondering why she didn't mention Amy Madison. Course could've cut off the body swap with her mom off at the head if they knew Amy before the swap took place.

Also I have to wonder how Jenny'll react to hearing Angelus is dusted.

That and will Dawn share her red "get out of staking" cards with Buffy for intel?

Y'know something just ocured to me as I finished this chpater up. LA...Law firm...Wolfram & Hart. WIthout ANgel to deal with them, what's to become of that firm? I mean one of my favorite ANgel characters is Lorne...c'mon surely you can't see Lorne as bad, he's fun! Just make a seabreeze and he's happy!

Ah I see, I can just see the opening reaction, 'Ah crap she recongizes me' It's ironic bec even though canon Dawn wasn't added to the Summers household until years later.

Bec of the crossover other day I was curius to read this, granted I skipped review of previous chapter for this one for a reason. The Origins chapter stated, I believe that Lydia is a Dr, likely professor (rather rather an MD) But anyways one thing strikes me as odd, how is Dawn expected to pass off she's not a time traveler when she shows that she knows things before others do.

Suchis the slippery slop e with time travel, that is for the person who is back in time. Somehoww I don't see how this'll last when Buffy gets into town.

Really enjoying your story and best of wishes on your recovery.

Thanks for writing and sharing.