Are you going to update Do They Notice Me?

This is fantastic. I love it. You did it perfectly.

Sequels are not a bad idea. But I like how you ended this, it's perfect.

Poor Johana. That really sucks, is the T. T going to make it?

That's... Not good. Four shouldn't have don't that.

Yay! Uriah's here! HE IS MY FAVORITE! Love love love the wristband idea! And I think it's funny how he assumes she's got an eating disorder. And not funny, but since it's Uriah I don't care.

Caleb is sweet. At least he's trying, and I like how you made Natalie and Andrew Tris' foster parents but still made them treat her like their own daughter.

Okay, never mind on the Caleb question. Also, you introduced Marlene! Yay!

Question; is Caleb still living with the Priors? Also, oh my word they are spoiling them rotten. It's really nice, I like those kind of humans.

I'm not sure they would let Johanna on the ambulance. Anyways, I guess he was really stressed. Poor kid.

Yes! Marcus is going to jail! Why did it take Johana this long to report him? I mean, this obviously isn't something to be taken lightly.

I love this! They're so in sync and they don't even know it. And I love how he's just like, "Beatrice is way too hard to say. You know what', I'll just call you Tris." And that's that. Nicknames are so hard and come so quickly. I'm Willifred to all of my camp friends. I don't even know why but it's my name now.

Okay. this is really good. I like how tris is reacting to Natalie. It's realistic. And I really like Natalie, she's really nice and caring.

I really like this! It's certainly a unique story, and I like how you've made four out to be. Are the rest of the gang going to be in this?

I did enjoy it. And I enjoy the positive yet realistic portrayal of support groups too.