Okay, I know you're probably never going to read this review because this story hasn't been updated in almost five years, but how the hell did any of the Oboreshi survive? And I'm not talking about the Samsara not being able to kill all of them off. Hashirama, Tobirama, and Madara were all right there just watching the battle. What exactly was stopping any one of those three from intervening after Karma was safe and wiping out any remaining Oboreshi? I know you're trying to show off how cool your clan of OCs is, but I think you're forgetting how ridiculously OP those three are. Hashirama could have turned the entire battlefield into a sea of trees, Tobirama could have used the Flying Thunder God Technique to slaughter them all in the blink of an eye, and don't even get me started on Madara (Perfect Susanoo gg). My point is, this battle should have been a complete curbstomp in the favor of the Samsara clan and their Konoha allies. I just find it hard to believe the Samsara took so many casualties when Hashirama, Tobirama, and Madara could have helped them out.

Oh, and one more thing. At one point in this chapter Madara considers summoning some meteors on the enemy village. That technique actually requires the Rinnegan (it utilizes the Deva Path's gravity manipulation) which he doesn't have at this point in time. Right now he only has the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.

hey! you’re probably no longer active or are busy, but anyways this is the second piece i’ve read by you. i’m not one to usually comment, but i really think your writing is outstanding! your storylines are interesting and unique, and i am glad i read this one.

This was all kinds of interesting, thanks for the read.

I reeeaaally like you're idea of a reincarnated village, and how they aren't all from the same time. It was very original, and though this work was left off here, I'll save it to come back to sometime. Thank you for writing this intriguing story! I hope you continue and write another SI, OC-SI, or even OC-centric story!

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

yo tight story u got here. might wanna say u dropped it or smth so we don't have to wonder.

Ah, I don't know if you intend to ever return to this story, but I really enjoyed what I read and would love to see more if you ever planned on it. Also what a cliff hanger, oof. I loved the writing, wished I had found this story sooner. I loved the establishment of the Samsara clan culture, all those little details and history; especially the fables. Great writing I'm glad I found this!

I know your not updating this again, but just wanted to thank you for the interesting take on a OC...kinda SI...you know what I mean lol.

This story is so amazing! One of my favorites! Its a shame it hasn't been updated in 5 years.

This is such a good fic. I love the snark at the end. Sad to see the story abandoned before completion, but I understand life just gets in the way.

"...Assalaamu 'alaykum wa rahmatu-Allah," oh are they using an islamic prayer? I'm muslim so I was confused for a sec, there is a funeral prayer so it might be that.

I really like this! It's super unique and I haven't really seen anything like it.

oh nooo, such a cliffhanger. But I admit that I've snorted through this chapter more times than I can count :D
Karma is a great character.

"When there are trees, kids will climb them. Even if it's grandma."

Oh dear God, why would you write this sentence? I love it as much as I hate it.

are you going to ever update this?