Yes! Please keep it going

Excellent udea. Writing what some of us had hoped for. Thanks for sharing!

please please continue this was amazingly written

Can't wait for new chapter!

Really good, More please..

Continue! Continue! :) thanks for writing.

So good! Definitely want more..

That should read TBC! because if it isn't, I'll be such a sad panda.

Hope you'll update soon. This looks pretty damn promising.

I agree 10000000% ... This needs to be continued! I know, I know ... I don't mean to sound so demanding. But dammit, get back at that keyboard now woman! (You know I love you, right?)

okay absolutely fuck off with that ending. I wasn't expecting it at all in the slightest and I am fkjal;fjd;ajajfkldjak; WHY

I absolutely adore this coupling. Plz continue. plzplzplz. There is something so undeniably sexy about these two. This chapter begs all kinds of questions...there's obviously been a build up to this. THERE'S OBVIOUSLY MORE COMING AFTER.

I'm always intrigued by how people portray them. To be honest, I haven't found a lot that keep them in character. I despise anything that turns Daryl into an adoring housewife. The intricacies these two share are way too complex for that. But this, the idea that neither one of them can help it. That's what makes them so ridiculously appealing to me. I mean, obviously, I wouldn't mind being stuck anywhere with the Dixon, but you made it sound even more impossibly wonderful. Ugh. That light hitting his eyes. Ugh. ugh. damn you again for ending it there.

But the sexual tension. GodDAMN the tension. I kind of want to die right now. Please continue. I'll devour anything you write about them.

And, pray tell, why exactly is there a question mark after "TBC"? I think that might be a typo...if you leave this here, I will totally combust, and then none of my sotries will ever get finished, and that includes "Inhale,Exhale". I'm pulling my ultimate threat for this one, Brodie. I needs this Bethyl, or Maggie/Connor gets it.

Yes please!

Great first chapter!

As always, so perfect. Beth's POV is so innocent and demure and that makes this all the more erotic. Of course, I was hoping something more would happen inside that trunk. My favorite line was that but about his belt buckle or a third arm hitting her pelvis (forgive me, I'm on my phone and can't quote verbatim). I think my face as I read was much like what Beth's must have been. Always ready for new Bethyl, especially if its coming from you. Bring it on!