Reviews for Luciano |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's oké don't worry it's great so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() "He's acting like you aru" XDDDDD My favorite part and yep, that totally sounds like something China would say. Amazing piece of work by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this so far! Hope you continue! |
![]() ![]() FUCKING GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is AWESOME! Bro you should expand on this idea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off all, this does NOT suck. IT'S AWESOME, JUST LIKE PRUSSIA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes Russia, you are in very much trouble. Amazing job, made me laugh. Well, Ciao! |
![]() ![]() Keep writing |
![]() ![]() AWSOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Well, it was excellent, but... I wouldn't classify this as humor. I would classify it as either General or Drama. But it was really really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm afraid your fic might be lacking of humour. There were parts that are funny but that's about it. The latter part of the story got serious to me...or rather, suspenseful. But don't take my criticism as something else. I'm not saying this is a horrible fic. In fact, I think it has a potential to be a great fic. I just think this story fits to a different genre. Like suspense. Still, at least you tried your best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't stop here! This is awsome! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot dam what's happening?! Keep going, please |