Reviews for Luciano
gazal.blirf chapter 1 . 6/17/2017
It's oké don't worry it's great so far
Flamehaze1 chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
"He's acting like you aru" XDDDDD My favorite part and yep, that totally sounds like something China would say. Amazing piece of work by the way
IcelandicLicorice chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
I really like this so far! Hope you continue!
Veee chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
FUCKING GOOD!
LillianNovakJones chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
This is AWESOME! Bro you should expand on this idea!
Kairi4ever16 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
First off all, this does NOT suck. IT'S AWESOME, JUST LIKE PRUSSIA
Missingwings chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
Yes Russia, you are in very much trouble. Amazing job, made me laugh. Well, Ciao!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Keep writing
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
AWSOME
ToscaThorCat chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
...Well, it was excellent, but... I wouldn't classify this as humor. I would classify it as either General or Drama. But it was really really good!
keymace101 chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
I'm afraid your fic might be lacking of humour. There were parts that are funny but that's about it. The latter part of the story got serious to me...or rather, suspenseful.

But don't take my criticism as something else. I'm not saying this is a horrible fic. In fact, I think it has a potential to be a great fic. I just think this story fits to a different genre. Like suspense.

Still, at least you tried your best.
YueRaven224 chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Please don't stop here! This is awsome! Please continue!
Fruitstogether chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Hot dam what's happening?! Keep going, please