Reviews for Allen's Makeover
juliamlinaric.as chapter 1 . 9/18/2019
Awwww
catspats31 chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

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Please remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like AdultFanfiction or WattPad.
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
little bit of lemon juice but I loved it. You did a good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
Loved it!
Nella Moonblood Royalle chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
KAMI-SAMA! tat was coooo cute
nightlighteer chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
I bet Lenalee and Lavi were somehow watching that the whole time...
SquirrelQueen88 chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
That was great! And I totally agree with you, to hell with it, let the corruption begin! (Lord knows that the world won't be able to handle many more yaoi fangirls ;) )
hey hey hey hoe chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Amazing!
SpiritofLove961 chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Awesome one-shot; I loved reading it!

Love, Spirit
Tolazytosignin chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
I loved the story! Good job!
midnightrose8888 chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
aw! kawaii!
Firediva0 chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
This is really good! There was a few spelling mistakes but nothing major. I really liked this. Yullen forever!