this is so good I wish it was finished

good story, I hope you continue, chao chao!

I just started binge reading this and would keep at it if it wasn't so late. I'm really enjoying this and am excited to see what else happens! Great job so far!

This is a great fanfic I would love it if you could continue with the story

update pl0x

when NaruSaku fans loose their shit

that's how you claim it does not see him physically attractive and it was obvious that it was attractive so you're fucking your story if it is a rather hinata and naruto were zero physical attraction and whether emotionally what hinata inspirata admiration finds in naruto and not love and naruto does not love hinata and is not attracted to her physical rally pierdul and August so I am pissed off by such nonsense of naruto and sakura comparisons, which store the most-developed relationship anime and manga but the developers gave naruto a girl who was not even a girl in his type or attractions theoretically, ino tenten sakura temari would not even go to hanabi and not hinata but in terms of naruto love, this should be the last film narusaku, not naruhina or sasusaku the main character should get a girl who wants a hero

I lost interest after the third chapter seriously brother and sister are nonsense shit

Your story is really good, albeit a tad predictable. You have an excellent writing style and switch between action and romance enough to keep both sides refreshing. My only issues with your story are personal ones that in no way deter from your story. First off is that it feels too much like the Akatsuki arc. Naruto and some others have a special power and now this mysterious group wants to gather them up. Additionally, your characters don't feel real to me. I don't know how to explain, but it seems like you try and stay true to the characters but that makes the subtle deviations more noticeable. Ino, for instance, drives me crazy sometimes. She plays way too many mind games, no pun intended, and she is way to hard on Naruto at times. The fact that you have Naruto falling even deeper in love with her despite not giving them much common ground or any reason to seems far-fetched. Seriously, would you fall in love with someone, regardless of how attractive, if all the did was berate your every little mistake? Naruto, even though you have him saying all the right things, is coming off extra strength pitiful. I get that he is depressed, trust me, but I feel like you are about half way through the story and he still isn't making positive strides. Please, I beg you, give him some purpose, something to fight for because honestly at this point Ino and he just don't seem to be at the point where she could give him the drive he needs.

Hope you continue. Good story

you do realize that only ice bloodline holders and yuki mind know how to use ice style

Not Abandoned :)

Great story so far, I like how you're building up the NaruIno pairing. However, reader beware, this story is most likely abandoned.

This is so EXCITING! Plz make it longer :(

I'm only on 5 so far but I really enjoy how you've written this story so far all the NaruIno fanfics I've read either Sakura is a complete bitch to Naruto and he gives up Ino swoops in an saves him. Or its Sakura tries to set him up with someone else Ino comes in or straight instant let's be together.

But with yours it's a steady build up Ino tries to help Naruto with his demons and convinces Sakura to talk to him as Family and as a best friend. I really like how it's going so far the other one I read it was a very slow build up and was going well. Until the written would jump from one thing to the next to the next it was kinda all over the place hard to keep up with. But yours it very well done I look forward to continuing this story sucks I'm almost halfway done lol.