Hi.
I know how important the reviews are as a feedback. I also know, that I mess up every review I write.
So I just want to tell you this: I really love this story and its characters. And I would be very happy to see it continue. (And I'm sure I'm not the only one)

I'm really happy Maddie escaped Delila's captivity. Though being arrested right after that doesn't look like fun at all... At least Jais and Herrel were there. It looks really interesting now. :)
Is the arrest Delila's doing? Or someone else found out about Maddie's past? Who -is- Maddie?

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So Bainhall -is- very, very suspicious and Johannes is... what is he anyway? Were they sent by Delila? Or do they have a plan of their own? Keep writing, I can't wait for more. :)
But...
There is...
One thing...
The last chapter ended with Maddie taking Ash to dinner, what happened with that?!
I want more Ash and Maddie! /(_)/

So... Maddie loves Ash, Ash loves Maddie. But they are not together. (sad) Delila wants Maddie for herself, but Maddie has no idea who she is. And that guy who gave him that work is very suspicious. It almost looks like he's a Delila's figure... Delila is so creepy, so I would believe that.
Speculations aside, I like the story. All three parts of it - the random guy's assignment, Delila's and Maddie's past and what I'm looking forward the most, Maddie's and Ash's relationship. :3 I won't deny it, I'm a romantic soul and I want them to be together.
Keep on writing, I wanna know how it develops. :)