loving this fic so much. I love how you've portrayed Dumbledore, and included background info from his perspective too. I'm liking your scenes with the goblins, as they aren't simply rewrites of many other versions. I'm loving the general plot, and I still have no idea who the other riders may be.

loving this fic so much. good plot, character development, and layout. pretty good Grammer and spelling too, I noticed a couple Grammer mistakes but they were hardly noticable and didn't detract from the story.

isn't Dumbledore's patronus a phoenix, not a goat?

I'm loving this story so far, great character development and creative plot. I like how you've portrayed several of the characters and that you haven't bashed any characters.

good first chapter, nice take on Gringotts, it was better than many others I've read.

Please finish

hey there
I know it's a difficult time for all of us but if you're still still writing fanfiction, could you please continue here. I like this story and I want to know where it goes

JM

I truly hope you have a plan to finish this story as it is a true masterpiece.

I would say Harry is being harsh, but then again, he is the avatar of death. No one should be able to assault him like that and get away with it

Finally! Snape isn't some snivelling brat anymore. He should've gotten over all that years ago

Nooooooooo, this is so good, it is a shame there isn't anymore. Thank you author for making this wonderful fanfic, even if it remains incomplete at the time this review is posted.

Is this story abandoned?

are you gonna come back to it or

The Founders have living heirs? I thought Ravenclaw didn’t have any. And Harry took Hannah on a ride... I should really get my kind out of the gutter...

Another chapter please