This is really good and I really hope that you will continue with it more and soon

I just got done with the first chapter and it is really good so far looking forward to reading more of it tomorrow

Aww yea real nice plz keep going soonz thx u

This is so good and actually gives some closure after LAD. Was really disappointed they let it end like that. Please update soon!

Wow very well written! I love the portrayal of Jack and Renee. If they're going to make season 8, they should totally base it on this story. I want some more of it! Please please please update soon!

Great chapter. Love the fluffy moments between Jack and Renee. Good to see you're continuing the story. :)

Great chapter! You really left us hanging there, I have a sense the story starts now. It's good that you are sticking to the to the same background story, makes it easier (please! Update your other fic) Loved your descriptions of BA, had to run for some dulce de leche ;)

Great update! Definitely worth the wait. I liked the descriptions of Buenos Aires, its like traveling through the story and the Sergio Mendoza character seemed cool. Sucks that the Russians still know Jack's alive. This does leave the potential for more action if you choose a more suspenseful plot where the Russians follow them to his new home or if some people go after Jack for the bounty. Though I do think Jack finally deserves some peace!

The thought of Chloe as a professor REALLY cracks me up! You could write a new comedy story just dealing with her and her first year teaching her students! Imagine a student who is going to her office and begging her to let him turn in an assignment late because his Internet crashed.

I like the Jack-Renee thing, this story makes me like Renee more so than the actual show does. Its interesting they're so committed to one another even though they never really spent much time together and never actually had a relationship. They only met in Season 7 and didn't talk again till Season 8 despite the messages Jack left on her phone. But I'm glad Jack has a chance to be happy with someone.

So far, it looks good.

Jack and Renee are exploring their changing lives and adjusting to their new life together after four years apart. At least he had to tell Kim that he and Renee are alive to prevent from feeling sad like he had to staged his death in season 4.

I wonder how Jack will find out about Renee's addiction to Vicodin.

One conservative criticism is that you could add some time and location for paragraph proposes, as you did so on your other stories.

Anyway, keep at your writing.

This is getting good. Also, fantastic work on the timeline explanation. Just 3 things to point out: Day 6 actually takes in May/June, Day 8 takes place 18 months after Day 7 in September 2018 and LAD takes place in September 2022. Apart from that, please continue.

Wow. This is a really powerful, painful piece

I haven't been on this site for over a year but was so happy to spot a new story from you! I love all your Jack/ Renee stories and am looking forward to reading this one. Xx

I love this story! Please write Chapter 5! I want more! :)

This has been a great story so far; definitely the the good/happy life that both Jack and Renee deserved.

Suggestion: How about when Jack and Renee gets settled, they have a shock and awe on the news that mentions the events that have occurred in 24: Solitary? ;)