very well written! Im terrified, but still enjoyed it!

I have to applaud this story it was dark and terrifying and manipulative. Definitely not a "feel good" story. But the imagery was vivid, the idea complex, and the story as a whole was fascinating. Very good job. I wish I could write my stories with as much passion as you do yours.

##. can i just say...

i absolutely LOVE your writing. i love your spot-on interpretation of erik. i loved this phic !

Wow

I was just re-reading this for the billionth time and realized I don't think I ever left a review; sorry about that! This is one of my all-time favorite phics. Your dark Erik is just perfect and gives me chills.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I sent this to my gf. I am more of a darker Erik she loves the romantic side of him. SheI are very very very I pressed with yer story. I'm gonna look up more. Bravi!

This was sick. Absolutely sick. He brainwashes her into believing there is no one else left in the world at all. That is sick. People forget that this side of Erik exists. He is completely capable of this, and this is extremely canon in my opinion. I would love to see a continuation of this where Raoul rescues her and they try to live normal lives which would be hard because Erik literally drove her to madness. Or you can leave it ambiguous for the readers to imagine themselves, because that's cool too. (writes a fanficiton on a fanfiction ;))

I loved this so much and the REAL Erik, not the bs mushy one. Thank you for writing this.

"You can only go so far, you know, my dear. Any further down and you will reach Hell."

Hot damn, this sentence. Usually I'm more of a sexy, protective Erik kinda girl but I'm really into this dark Erik right now. Is there something wrong with me?

I reread this again. Still excellent. I feel like it matches them perfectly. I would be interested in seeing more in the universe. If he lets her go, what her views are now, etc. Because it seems something fundamental has changed.

what?

How dare you. Your writing is absolutely lovely and chilling and I can't decide whether or not I regret reading this. Bravo. Now I need to find fluff to read before bed.

Your writing is extremely well-done and exquisitely heart-shattering.

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This is too horrifically in-character ohhhh noooo I hate being reminded that Erik is an antagonist

i cant breath read this ch