Pretty good story. Please continue!

Hey! This is a pretty decent story so far. However, the sentences are a little choppy and can be merged to flow better. For example, in this chapter (Cyclonic Grief), you said, "They had to find somewhere to hide because they could already see the lurking tornado in the distance. They were frightened. They knew it was the end." To make it flow better, maybe you could say, "At the sight of the lurking tornado in the distance, they knew they had to find somewhere to hide. They were also frightened, since they knew it was the end." Again, that's just my advice. Other than that, great job!