Oooooo this is the second time I've read this and it's as intense as the first time!
It's so well written and I'm feeling all sorts of things!
And I absolutely love this!

Hm...wow. That's all I can say to this. I am speechless. Congratulations, you've made me feel like puking almost as badly as the show Durarara itself. (Oh, and that's a good thing.) Even though this wasn't as twisted as you'd think it should be to make me feel this was, it still somehow filled me with dread. The kind of dread you get when there is no happy ending. So thank you for this.

This was incredibly clever. I did not see that one coming. I applaud you. XD

This makes so much sense...I'm horrified with myself cause I think it suits him so well...Those poor girls! They never had a chance!