Reviews for Persuasion
Zenchi to zen'n no kami chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
Jajaja este poema me mato zorrito :3
ReadingReadererReader chapter 1 . 3/12/2018
I really enjoy your poems, lol.
Vivaan chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
Oh wow... that was nice!
hsm1999 chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
It was really nice -
Oniele chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
This... sound accurate from a different perspective.
Tobee chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
This is brilliant
I love your portrayal of Kaguya!
sharingang chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Wow. I loved how you showed all of the aspects of her personality in less than 200 words! The endearing "Little Fox" name was my favorite little touch, though. :)
Monochromatic Sakura chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
I t was great, except for some bits where the poem didn't flow rather well. Other than that, I liked this very much! :)
Fighnjaci chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Okay,I don't really know why I read this or what I was expecting,but definitely nothing as good as this.

Would be nice if you wrote more of these.
King of Spears chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
That was hauntingly beautiful. I really wish they developed Kaguya's character more. So much potential, but too little time to properly introduce. BUT, if they did, she'd probably be too OP for anyone to do anything about Mugen Tsukuyomi, or she'd get a TNJ from Naruto and miraculously change her ways. Interesting read though.
98475aoeur chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Ohhhhhh this was interesting I love the language you used OuO
Tempestuous God of Valour-77 chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Holy Fuck. This is a true piece of art. You nailed Kaguya's personality right off the bat. This poem is fucking awesome.
stupidlymockingothers chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Holy spaceballs! This is awesome! I don't quite enjoy reading a poem but you've got my attention. Damn. Nailed Kaguya's personality right to the very tee. Confused at first, loving the next, angered thereafter, and lonely lastly. What a talent you have. Bravo.
Amy chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Very well done. I suck at poems and I am in awe of how you managed to portray Kaguya so... fully, at least the subtle and not-so-subtle hints to her personality in the manga. Such a shame she's sealed up. I expected a lot more from the manga since she had so much potential.
The Struggling Warrior chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
I think you managed to nail Kaguya's character really well. Or, at the least the little bit which was actually revealed in the manga. I really like the idea of Kaguya, but the execution in the manga was somewhat poor.

This was still an excellent poem, though. I would like to see more.
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