| Reviews for Obliviate and Goodbye |
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   Charlee56 chapter 3 . 7/4 And here's their happy ending. And a very good one it was! |
| c.karen09 chapter 3 . 6/23 Wonderful ending, and wonderful story. Thanks for writing! |
| FiberBard chapter 3 . 6/20 _ I enjoyed this story, especially the happy end. |
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 3 . 6/15 Lovely! |
| 3 chapter 3 . 6/1 i loved this x |
| stevem1 chapter 3 . 4/29 An evil Dumbledore and Order story, which is quickly resolved. An easy and good read. |
| J flood chapter 3 . 4/26 this story should be expanded upon |
| Kira Potter Jackson chapter 3 . 2/4 I find Sirius's revenge interesting. I don't like Remus being complicit in Dumby's plan. The pirates were very good. Kira |
| MelancholyNaz chapter 3 . 9/17/2019 all changes when Harry can see Snape's memories |
| Khatix chapter 1 . 8/24/2019 When I was watching the OoTP for the first time i was thinking that all Harry had to do was use his cloak, map, and a little plan and he could have Umbridge taken care of either by Oblivating the fuck out of her, pull a fake-moody and transfigure her to an animal, or lock her in the CoS. On the hunt there were so many ways they could of went about food and lodging by going muggle. Like seriously Hermione had that super bag and didn't think about stocking up on muggle money, hell they could of found an out of the way mid class hotel (that also has free continental breakfast) apply a few muggle repelling and notice me not charms to a pair of joined rooms and safe lodging and warm. Hell they could of went to a public storage place set the tent up in one of the units and charm it as well. The whole camping in the woods thing was moronic. |
| KnowInsight chapter 3 . 5/9/2019 the only pity with this story is bad Remus. makes me sad and seems particularly ooc. the rest was quite fun |
| peggy77 chapter 1 . 4/27/2019 Only read a few paragraphs because I adore both Sirius and Remus. Don't intend to finish it or read anymore of your stories but I also still wish you good luck. |
| thelibaryian93 chapter 3 . 4/22/2019 A very good story, Thank you for wrighting it. The Libaryian93 |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 3/15/2019 A more than fine story in the best bf tradition. Only quibble would be the resolution with Voldemort and Harry’s scar. Secondary concerns are SO/spouses for the kids. i.e. out breeding. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 3/15/2019 Good start to a vintage bf tale. One thought though: They left the job incomplete. 1. H&H need their things, packed and shrunked. 2. Ginny needs to be Obliviated too. 3. They should have put paid to Umbridge’s account too. With Fawkes changing sides, they now have mobility. Next stop should be the Burrow and Molly. Sirius ought to be able to get Lupin to HQ, find out if Tonks is involved and deal with the were. TGM (Still mourning for the flyer) |
