Hi.

well... what a pleasant surprise. Not many long stories based on WA universe. An one going deep on holmcross project... wow.

There could be more interludes, I think. If only just to see both Cecilia and Jane irate since now the know more about Steven :) (one oozing magic on the 'guardians, turn that THING into paste' level, and the other borrowing Rudy's ARMs to just make a point).

Thank you for keeping writing this. Loved it.

Hmm, I wonder what the urgent matter could be...?

It's always so nice to see the dynamics between Koch and Raf. So cute!

Anyway, enjoy the lively banter. Sounds like stuff's about to go down...

Berserk: Oh come on, Zeikfried! I wasn't done with these guys!

Zeik: No Berserk. You have to survive until the first game.

In all seriousness though, there be much danger in giving the Guardian Blade so much power and control. But unfortunately, the Demons are forcing their hands on all fronts.

I can only pray this won't end in tears...

Well guys, what happens in Ruskal stays in Ruskal. XD As always, Nils and Wesson have the most amusing banter, I can relate so strongly to their dynamic.

On a darker note, there's certainly strong mention of Holmcross vs Human, and Wesson's casual racism isn't helping matters.

Speakings of race...is Steven really as human as he claims?

Up next! Steven's a cyborg, Springfield elopes with the Guardian Blade, Wesson and Nils take in an annoying toddler and play teen parents. Hilarity ensues! Oh, and also, battle at hand with the Demons in the Arctic front.

We must investigate! Onwards ho!

Uh uh, Steven's up to something... Maybe Luger was a little too quick to change his tune?

The banter between Nils and Wes is always fun, and of course even with apologies there will be sass.

Now then, what could Zeikfried and Steven been talking about, I wonder? Usually if it were general fighting banter, you would be able to hear a little from a distance... Hmm.

Well, only time will tell. Onwards ho!

Alright, they're finally going to Milama! Hopefully they won't run into too much trouble while there.

As far as story goes, it's really intriguing and does a good job of explaining itself, especially considering you're basing off of 1000 years prior to the first Wild Arms game which we have limited knowledge of. The only thing I would advise is being mindful of narrative grammars, and spelling Gurdijeff correctly (and the other Guardians in general). I did notice a misspelling of that during the funeral scene.

Also, just to kinda spice up the imagery, if there were various color names you could use besides the basics? Such as, what shade of brown? Of green?

And do these harpies have talons? Aside from a little more strength in description, I like what you have so far! Keep it up!

So, it's apparently been three years since anything was posted on this fic. Have decided to start adding things again since this site is easier to view on the phone than an actual document.