*sigh* The technique is simply sloppy. YELLING BEING WRITTEN IN ALL CAPS IS NOT PROPER ETTIQUITE WHEN IT COMES TO WRITING! YES, ROWLING DID IT, BUT SHE USED IT SPARINGLY WHEN SHE DID! (Also, there are way to many of these smattered through the text.) As well as the fact that the numbers are spelled out. It was fine, when you talked about how Dianne died at the age of 12 in your authors notes, but in the main body of the story, you should have spelled out things like 8:30. Yup. I used my review as an example.

Darn you! I feel bad doing this since you dedicated to people you care for. I won't flame you that badly. It's going to be like feeling a candle flame but not touching the flame to get burn. Now the spelling and the grammer is alright. The Spacing beats a paragraph of doom. Lastly: The Characters already sound like Mary Sues.

So where is Celeste and Remus?

The last part is so funny, You can even forgive Darimus, after all, the metamorphmagus is totally awesome!

You never fail me, never ever. I was sitting in front of my computer, looking absolutely bored after skimming through a few pages of the Harry/Hermione and James/Lily pairings here in . No offense to the other authors, but i couldn't find anything that would satisfy my craving. But then a glorious idea came to me - why don't i check out your works one more time? You know, to check if i already read everything. And so I did, and yet again, my cravings were fulfilled by your absolute greatness. I praise you, much to the extent that i cannot even find the words to describe the feeling of awe running through my veins. Yes, of course, you can call this review overly dramatic for someone as me to deliver to you, but then again, you are...well, absolutely great. These words don't even deserve to be delivered to your doorstep because of the lazy bastard that wrote it.
You just string unspeakable magic that makes each and every one of us alive as we read your works. It inspires me to do things better - to make myself better - just because of you. And your brain. And your works. Yet again, call this review overly dramatic, but deep inside, you, Dimantrien, deserve praise. I would kill (not really kill, but i hope i got my point across (not that i wouldn't, seeing your great mind)) anyone who wishes to disagree with me. Or at least debate with them until they melt into a puddle of nothing and grovel at your feet. Or mine. But i'd prefer yours.
Ending this overly dramatic review with the phrase "Looking forward to read more of your works,"
A. Pikachu

omg! im so sorry i havent reviewed for ages! ah! ur soo good at writing its unfair! this story is amazing! yay! their all happily together. so cute!

Aw! This is such a great ending! I love it! Its very cute! This is a wonderful story and hopefully you'll keep writing L/J fics or a sequel. I dont know if I've reviewed before but ive been reading for a while now :) Again, i loved this story!

Snif, snif! It was beautiful and a great ending. i'm just sorry it ended. Very good work. I loved it.

Brilliant ideas. Keep it up!

I feel so sorry for Lily. She didn't do anything to James to make him break up for her. But I do not feel sorry for James. It is his fault that he is sad over Lily.

Now I understand why you didn't have them acting like a couple. If you had, the the forein girl (I don't remember her name) wouldn't have kissed James.

You clearly are a good author and keep writing. You will only get even better. I can't wait to see if Lily and James make up.

Cha

Loved the plan thing. Are you finishing already? Oh! *poutes deeply* I can't believe it. I'm loving this. Well, as long as Lily and James, Chase and Sirius get together it's fine with me. Don't worry the chapter was long but it was worth it. Update soon. Cheers.

OMG! Thank you. You've just helped me a little bit more with my Eng. grade cause I found one of my vocab words in this chapter. Is it possible that you can put more? lolz. Update soon!

-Katherine

yay! another chapter! aww how cute siruis still loves her! they make such a good couple! poor lily poor poor lily

wow dis is good

post more soon!

luv always

lexie

This story is so kewl! u just gotta continue with it...plz...

OMG! I TOTALLY agree with you about the evil teachers plotting to take over the world thing. lolz. I hope you update soon cause I need MORE! Trust me, I've given up reading at LEAST fifty fictions cause they're sorta crappy. But YOU...you're GREAT. I can't wait for you to update!

-Katherine

I must say, this is the BEST Hp fanfic I've ever read! Sure, others have beter plots and junk, but I love drama! You're story rocks! Please update soon! If you don't, I'll keep on sending you reviews everyday and e-mailing you until you do! Consider that a threat! Sorry, I had too much suger! I. Love. Your. Story. End of story! Up date soon! Update I tell ya! update!