Awesome story mate

Lucy was very satisfying to read in this chapter. From seeing Mystogan and Erza and Mira teamup with the Gajeel fight. It was a treat to read. Kudos mate!

Yoooo, that was pretty dope to see the Squirrel form was inspired by Makoto. The description and speed reminded me of her in the first place, so that was tight.

um..are you a nali shipper? because i am(95% nali 25% nalu) and is this a story about nali? please say it is!

What a fun ride! I enjoyed this.

This story was awesome! But I'm more than a little confused about the ending.

When are you geting natsu and lisanna together because I say she should help out in edalos because she whants to save her family and help her boyfriend out

Lisanna should get a fire based take over that Natsu helped her get and maybe a demonic cat form that is later revealed to have allowed her to get it because of Natsu being END so it could keep an eye on him. To pull him into darkness.

I loved reading this! Your writing is in character and well paced. I was unable to stop reading until I reached the end, this story's a real page turner! :D

this might seem rude. okay when rewriting the fairytail story you either give Lucy new powers, make it a crossover, Lucy is stronger,or what you did add oc/dead/other character. this type of story is very rare I have only seen 1 other like it accept there is an OC dragon slayer. I like it but there isn't a lot of creative parts that stray from the anime/manga accept that lisanna and her battles/relationship.

That was fun and I'm eager for more! Please update again VERY SOON! Okay?

Please continue the story as I can't find any Nali stories that put it in a good light and not only that but this story itself is really good.

Ok, I read on your bio that you decided to end the story. I am depressed because you are one of the few writers that actually ship NaLi without bashing other characters. While I am depressed that you won't continue the story, I won't force you to write. I just want to say thank you for trying your best.

Only saw one mistake in the Karen and Loke scene that should get cleared up but otherwise lovely job. The chapter was great and I hope to read more

Loved it :)