Oh crap. This is a great story! Please continue!

Sorry, but I’m chapter 3...

Am I being silly or did Dib just run into Butler and Artemis?

oh my child
why did you wait, like, a year
i think it was a year?
i don't know
we all understand stuff like writers block but
at least you updated?
good chapter btw lol

Ahahahahahahaha, nice! Dib got you good, Danny! Dib got you good..! xD I'm seriously curious about what will happen next. (I also like all these random cameos, haha. I seriously LOL'd when I saw Detective Conan in there. Even though he'd really have at LEAST kept an eye on Zim rather than run away. Cause Zim is that suspicious, lmao.) I'm also a bit worried about what Danny's parents are getting up to. Cause when Clockwork interferes, there's some serious fizz going on. O-O)

Thus is awesome! Your writing may seem occasionally confusing, but it's rather good.

Great chapter, great cliffhanger. 9.99/10. I didn't give it 10/10 because I believe perfect does not exist. Its pretty close though.

Thank you for using the world "commode" :)

Busted. (In more ways than one, ha.)

-PJ

UPDATE NOW OR I WILL ZIM WILL BE MAD AT YOU!
*You hear Zim laugh in the distance*

Uhh what's wrong with chapter six? I can barely read it. It has font names and size names. For me anyway.

Hey-o! Things are getting intense.

-PJ

...Dun dun dun

DID YOU CAMEO WHO I THOUGHT YOU DID I JUST SCREAMED INTO A PILLOW SO LOUD

DUDEDUDEDUDEDUDE WE HAVE SO MUCH IN COMMON DUDE OMG ARTEMIS FOWL CSDVSSSSHEAASJTBDN.
I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG AGO IT WAS WHEN YOU STARTED WRITING THIS BUT OMG

I can just imagine Danny seeing the Xbox and floating over to it with a goofy grin on his face XD. WHY DOES EVERYONE HAVE AN AJ MEMBERSHIP BUT ME ARRRGGHH