Absolutely love this. I am still hoping for some kind of redemption arc for Morgana, that she ends up with Merlin.

Love this story. Love the premise of Balinor being handed kingship from the fisher king and Merlin growing up with two parents. Ah Morgana. The circumstances of her birth again a tragedy in the maing unless a path of redemption and happiness can be forged for her with Merlin. They are each others equal/

Excellent beginning

I love how organized and planned out this is. Finally someone registers what Uther said in the FIRST episode. Something about “when I came to this land”. Gtg read the next chapter!

Morgana is older than Arthur though.

If K isn't in Cam, how will he be able to aid M in his quest to unite Albion?

This story is marvelious. Finished it in two days. Kuddos to you my internet friend, kuddos. To the Fav's!

cette histoire est magnifique.

Ugh, I hate Uther! You do an excellent job portraying the different characters, and I like how you give individual knights a character and a spotlight, instead of treating them as some vague entity in the background like the show and other fanfics do. There a number of grammatical mistakes (when you call Ealdor an "outline" village, do you mean outlying?), but otherwise your writing if excellent. Thanks for the great story; I'll get back to reading!

Wonderful story development
nice start

It's great! I can't wait for the epilogue. But even more I want to read about Merlin's and Arthur's bromance.

loved it read it in one and I have added it to' the best of Merlin' community

just found this loving it

On Mordred being the son of Morgause and Arthur-Mordred has dark hair(I think) and both Morgause and Arthur have blond hair. I think it'd be better for Morgause to head to Frith for instruction.

I look forward to the sequel when it comes out.

Nicely written,
One thing: "embezzled" isn't the word you want to use there "emblazoned" is the correct one.
-MP