| Reviews for Don't You Worry Child |
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  ur mom chapter 48 . 12/26/2015 put trigger warnings in your story for a sexual abuse mention. that's a tip after reading an early chapter |
 Princess PrettyPants chapter 47 . 12/8/2015 Love the shout out to Marvel's Jessica Jones, which is an awesome show on Netflix! |
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 12/2/2015 Great chapter |
| ishir1 chapter 43 . 9/5/2015 Awesome when will the next chapter come |
| xXMistyImaginingsXx chapter 40 . 8/18/2015 Poor, Samantha. :( Compelling chapter though. Can't wait to see more. |
| The Cursed Sapphire chapter 13 . 7/28/2015 Okay, love the story so far, but you made a mistake in chapter 11. Captain America can't get drunk. It mentions it in Captain America: The First Avenger. He was sad and drinking a lot of beer, but clearly stated "I can't get drunk." Just thought I'd point it out. |
| Natasha Staleek chapter 37 . 7/5/2015 I am eager to read more! |
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/8/2015 LOVE THE UPDATE |
| blue mountain fairy chapter 35 . 6/9/2015 FINALLY! |
| Guest chapter 32 . 5/18/2015 LOVED THIS UPDATE |
| Queeri0s chapter 7 . 5/18/2015 I really love this:) Steve and Samantha are super cute! *Squee!* I've only found two problems while reading... One is that there was no trigger warning when you described Samantha's abuse. This is an easy fix that could possibly save someone who really has been through sexual abuse from reliving painful memories. Just add a small authors note at the top of the chapter letting people know that there is a semi graphic depiction of rape and physical abuse. Then star off the bit with the offensive material so people can skip over it. Anyways... No big deal, you probably didnt know. Second problem is how everyone around Samantha is acting about her rape. The way her friends and family are acting makes it seem like she just went through a bad breakup... Like Matthew just cheated on her or something. A person in Samantha's position would need serious help and counseling... And Pepper and Tony seem to just be brushing it off. Again, I really love this story, and those were the only things that were really bothering me. But kudos for writing about such a tough subject... Maybe just do some more research on writing about rape victims and rape in general first. Keep writing:) |
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/12/2015 WOW OK NOW YOU NEED TOVUPDATE AGAIN I'M FREAKING DYING THIS WAS PERFECT STEVE AND SAMANTHA NEED TO GET TOGETHER AGAIN AIGHT PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOU YOU BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL PERSON |
| Lexeeehh chapter 31 . 5/12/2015 Holy crap! Please let them get back together |
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/10/2015 I love this book so much, please update! |
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/6/2015 Oh no! Is it over now? |
