Reviews for Painful Truths
Sasuke-my-love chapter 15 . 7/7/2018
I fell in love with Kira omg so fucking cute :3
Love the story! (Again I'm meow-chan who is too lazy to write from my original account lol xD)

Love your fanfics
BabyTgo chapter 15 . 5/18/2018
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love chapter 15 . 4/26/2018
update your boy meets world stories please
alysha.a.kent chapter 15 . 3/21/2018
I. Am. So. Happy! I will most certainly look forward to a sequel in the future. This story was amazing.
Akira Nishikawa chapter 15 . 3/19/2018
I can't believe this is finally over! Seems like forever : ) I totally enjoy the ride. Thank you so much for sharing your work. I am looking forward to read the next updates if the forgotten ones and the sequel of this.
Akira Nishikawa chapter 14 . 3/19/2018
I have been enjoying this story since the beginning but I just can't understand why you keep writing Obotto instead of Otouto, I just can't... Is there some kind of meaning for you write it like that?
Prascal chapter 12 . 3/9/2018
This story still need a lot of work, most of it lies in the spelling.
I see lots of basic spelling mistakes, which on their own wouldn't be so big, but once they add up they make this story difficult to read.
Here are some, but not all, of the things you need to correct or learn in order to make this story better;
Jutsu, not jitsu. I can not stress this enough. For any Naruto fan it hurts seeing one of the basic words spelled wrong.
You're you are.
Your owning, your car, your cat, your life etc.
They're they are.
They've they have
Their owning, their lives, their village, their dreams etc.
Come/cum, not cam. Cam is a webcam, not sexual. This one is hard to get over when trying to read a sex scene.
Linebreak - instead of writing XXXX there is a tool for line break in the text editor once you've uploaded text to this site. Please use it.

These are the ones that pop up the most frequent that I can remember on the top of my head, but there has been countless others. If English isn't your first hand language, see if you can have someone else correct it for you.
Lady yang chapter 12 . 3/3/2018
This idea is amazing. I love the whole spirit world theme. It is very interesting and well thought out. I wasn't expecting this change at all but I'm very happily surprised. I like the family relationship you've created for shikamaru and kiba both. Patent relationships are sometimes hard for me to write and I think you did a really good job. I also enjoy the affection that kakashi has for sasuke. It's very sweet and realistic. Like you can feel them yourself. Naruto is also a character that you've written into the story in a wonderful way. I'm so happy that sasuke could see his son! And itachi:D It we such an amazing way to tie them back into the story and help sasuke along in healing and getting back his will to live!
alysha.a.kent chapter 12 . 2/23/2018
I can't even. Just wow lol I freaking CRIED when Sasuke got to hold his son again.
CreepInsane chapter 11 . 2/18/2018
That spiritual world thing is Awesome! I mean Sasuke being the portal to those demention is so cool! How did you get an idea like that? It's so well thought! :D
That part you said about a soul being able to escape from any dimension, even hell thing... I'm guessing Orochimaru will come back? I hope it's that!
Big thanks for updating and I'm looking forward for more! I love that story!
Akira Nishikawa chapter 11 . 2/17/2018
So much to take in! But finally it seems things are going to turn for the better. I am very happy with how all of them are taking this, specially Naruto, Shika and Kiba...

Thank you for this update! I enjoyed my reading : )
CreepInsane chapter 10 . 2/11/2018
*Eyes turns into hearts* I love your story sooooooooo much! Please please please update soon!
Lady yang chapter 10 . 2/5/2018
Yay! I was excitation to see you had updated another naruto story:) those are my favorite among your writing. This chapter was really good, and I love how your developing more characters into the story. Bringing more people in and having shikamaru and his family begin to help sasuke is amazing. I've never read a story with this theme and plot before. It's really interesting and I love that Sasuke brought Akumaru back. It was a really interesting idea, and I wasn't expecting it at all. Great job with writing the families and I love how you've shown a more mature naruto. Great job:)
alysha.a.kent chapter 9 . 1/12/2018
There hasn't been a single story of yours that I don't like yet, you're seriously amazing with what you do.
alexisnotamused chapter 9 . 11/23/2017
I adore your stories so much, you always have such great ideas!
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