It is truly depressing to see this tail is unfinished. Your Warden is an interesting woman and I enjoyed this piece. However there were several typos and minor grammar errors.

I've read through the whole story in the last couple of days and I absolutely love it! I hope you're planning to continue it soon :)

Really good chapter. I love Zevran's inner monologue.

This was a truly heartwarming chapter. Thank you for sharing.

Wonderful exchange between Zev and Cyrion prompting Zev's thoughts/doubts/intentions.

I look forward to reading more of this. I think the way you've developed the relationships is very good, and it is a well written story.

yay! you're back!

awwwwwwww i love this story! they are so alike, its crazy.

Aww, that was so sweet.

Note for a landsmeet.
Is Alistair King? I have a feeling Anora married to a noble of Cousland or Guerrin blood would sate the nobility as much as an unrecognised bastard that wasn't ever mentioned before to them.

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I have always looked forward to the part of the tale when the curse is lifted. I hope Zevran learns to forgive himself before Kalli is hurt.

A great intro to the Dalish, most find the quest an outlier of the others, far from the politics and Blight that it has little bearing on most of the game. It's always a struggle to make it seem more. But you do well, and you'll do well here. More please!
xxx

Zevran would love to know what Kalli did - buying his presence from a golem! xxx

Off to a good start! I've played through as Kallian and wow after all she's been through, I can't help but feel sympathy for her character. I like your characterization of her.

So much for Zev's grand finale. I can't wait for Kalli to put her plans into motion.

A lovely aftermath/intermediary chapter. Kalli's reaction is wonderfully fresh for a Tabris and I thoroughly enjoy her take on things.