Odd beginning, but i hope it turns out well

This was an amazing story if youre ever bored you should write another epilogue, maybe where they kill the commander and have kids! Thanks for the great read! Blessed be!

Your writing is amazing !

TBH Big Ray is so endearing

I was loving everything about this story, the characters the plot the development, until this twist *crying emoji*.

You are a marvel and I adore this! Big Ray might be my favorite OC in any fic I've ever read! Thank you for all this wonderful work you've done here. Bravo!

I loved every minute! Thank you. I needed a happy ending.

Overall your writing is good, but your paragraphing is all over the place. You'll have someone talk (for example, Finn) and then you'll just jump into another person's thoughts (for example, Bellamy) without making a new paragraph. It can get kind of confusing.

I loved this story! The twist with Kane as Octiavia's father and the story about why was great! I wish their relationship had been mentioned in the epilogue tho. I think that the Clarke and Bellamy in the story are like how they are in the show which I love (some people make Clarke weaker). A story love

I think a guy who's good with kids is really hot too! Love the story so far especially the addition of kids and "Princess Clarke"

Hey, I'm not a regular fan fiction reader, especially not a piece of this magnitude... But I wanted to tell you what an EXTREMELEY talented writer you are. I mean you swept me right off my feet into this story with the plot, the imagery, all of it. I have no idea how old you are, but I fully believe you should be a writer someday, you have such a gift. You made me fall in love with the new versions of the characters you'd written, you didn't let the plot get overcome by romance, and with each plot twist I HAD to read the next chapter(screw homework who needs it ;) God I can't even put into words how addictive this story was, i read it after I'd watched season 2 and I liked it so much better. Anyway, this story has let me escape for a long time now and I wanted to thank you for that. But above all I think you're a phenomenal writer. From the regular comments you left with each post, I know you needed a lot of encouragement so I thought I'd leave some. But trust me, you don't need it, you're by far the best unpublished writer I've ever seen. That was really long and I'm sorry but I mean every word, I won't be surprised if I see your name on a book cover someday:)

Oh! And your story is absolutely AMAZING! Ive been looking for a good 100 fan fic and I finally found it! Thanks so much! Your Awesome!

Have I every mentioned how much I fucking LOVE the nickname the No-Man's Clan gave Bellamy? No? Well now I have. :D

OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY. Thank you for portraying these characters as they should! Please continue I wish to see a tiny Clark or Bellamy

your writing is addicting