So I know I'm a bit late to the show, but oh boy! This is incredible! I have never thought of the second film happening while Danny was with 50, and boy is it phenomenal! This is soooo good! I just love it! I mean, 50 is totally going to get suspicious when Danny doesn't come back, and isn't there news coverage of the heist at some point in the film!? I mean, if there is would they see that and be absolutely confused as to why Danny was caught trying to steal the egg!? There are just so many amazing possibilities! I love 50 and Ocean's 11 crossovers, especially where Danny is Turk! There seriously aren't enough of them, and this one is so good! It's just so exciting, so many possibilities, such a great idea, and incredible execution so far! This is so incredible! Thank you so much for writing it!

Awesome intro.
Hope it continues

I hope you still plan on writing another chapter!

This is looking good. Did you smash the time lines to put this between oceans 11 and the later movies? It's a neat idea and the first I've seen.
looking forward to more,
V

likin this

So far a good start.
I really like to know what you have up your sleeves for the plot.
;-)

This is a great start. I can't wait to read more of it. Please hurry there are not nearly enough of these.

I think the name you are trying for is MALLOY not Mallory. Otherwise interesting so far.